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My God
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I don't see what you mean-
Don't know who or what you are
You are like whispers in my head
Small whisps
My imaginations' more imposing
--
I cannot see or feel your presence
Thought I did..
Just for a second
But I've never really known.
--
I'd feel, turn right
So I'd turn right
And then, turn left
And I'd go left
I was made to feel at times that maybe I'd
Become a Fool
--
I do not know when you are here
Not the slightest bit of clue
Sometimes its like you are a ghost
A mere illusion of my mind
But you insist that I am blind and cannot
Cccc
--
You make
\\No sense
And crumple logic
And then ask me to believe you
Why that is, I'll never know
Perhaps I'll never know this secret.
But is that good-
How is that wise?
--
I ask despite the monotone
The endless silence from the sky
You voiceless dragon in the air
Tyrant!
Dismissing every prayer
--
So do not wonder why I doubt
If you know my thoughts,
Than how?
Tell me now before I ask it,
Tell me the answers to my questions before I even utter
Why?
Or I will hold you as a fraud.
You vain magician
--
Who the hell are you to blame me?
If you love me, come and claim me
Hear my voice, and make yours heard
If not,
My God.
Then the emptiness I feel, must then,
Logically
--
Be yours
Don't know who or what you are
You are like whispers in my head
Small whisps
My imaginations' more imposing
--
I cannot see or feel your presence
Thought I did..
Just for a second
But I've never really known.
--
I'd feel, turn right
So I'd turn right
And then, turn left
And I'd go left
I was made to feel at times that maybe I'd
Become a Fool
--
I do not know when you are here
Not the slightest bit of clue
Sometimes its like you are a ghost
A mere illusion of my mind
But you insist that I am blind and cannot
Cccc
--
You make
\\No sense
And crumple logic
And then ask me to believe you
Why that is, I'll never know
Perhaps I'll never know this secret.
But is that good-
How is that wise?
--
I ask despite the monotone
The endless silence from the sky
You voiceless dragon in the air
Tyrant!
Dismissing every prayer
--
So do not wonder why I doubt
If you know my thoughts,
Than how?
Tell me now before I ask it,
Tell me the answers to my questions before I even utter
Why?
Or I will hold you as a fraud.
You vain magician
--
Who the hell are you to blame me?
If you love me, come and claim me
Hear my voice, and make yours heard
If not,
My God.
Then the emptiness I feel, must then,
Logically
--
Be yours
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Very powerful. You use a lot of excellent imagery and I love the line "if you love me, come and claim me."
I am a believing Christian and have struggled fiercely with so many of the questions you pose.
I appreciate this lamentation. Well done!
I am a believing Christian and have struggled fiercely with so many of the questions you pose.
I appreciate this lamentation. Well done!